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COM: Forget me not

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250 :points: Commission for :iconforunth:, it´s her OC Neya.
Thank you :heart:

Media: copic markers, black marker, gel pens, ribbons, glitter
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1722x2397px 1.81 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First off, I'd like to congratulate you on creating such an awesome piece! I especially love her skin - it looks like it would be smooth and flawless in life, not to mention how it seems to be luminescent, like one of the stars in the background. Your mastery with coloring makes me jealous! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>

I also really like the fabric/ribbon you've used: it creates an interesting texture that draws the viewer in to take a closer look. You also did great in your placement to make it appear 3D as it sort of wraps around the shape of her body. The purple-ish streams seem to float off and look natural in their suggested movement, making it, indeed, appear as if she's in space.

There are a few things that seem off to me, mostly with the anatomy and posing. I'll start from the top and work my way down:

1. The shape of her hair on the left seems really odd to me. It makes it really confusing as to which way she's facing (it took me a bit before I realized her head was turned to the side), and makes the pose look inconsistent from the shoulders up. The very end of the little ponytail also seems to be flowing the wrong direction.

2. Her right hand is too large (and maybe a bit too long) and looks like its twisted the wrong way because of the placement of the fingers. First look at her thumb, and then look at her other fingers (which look fine), and they don't really match up.

3. Her...er, butt. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> I like the curviness of the right side, but it doesn't seem to match up with the left side, which looks flatter. I know that the angle would cause one side to seem larger, but here it creates the illusion of her having one normal cheek and one buxom one (if that makes sense).

Overall, though, this is a really lovely piece. The combination of medias meld together in a wonderful fantasy. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/> Keep up the great work!